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Dawn Corrigan
THE FALL
A Short Play


 

Who readeth Aeneas carrying old Anchises on his back, that wisheth not

it were his fortune to perform so excellent an act? --Sidney

 

 

CHARACTERS

 

AENEAS Trojan prince, destined to found Rome. A strapping warrior in the full flower

of his manhood.

 

ANCHISES Venerable father of Aeneas. In his youth he was seduced by Venus, Aeneas's

mother. At the time of the play he is aged and wise, though slightly deaf, and

known for his sage counsels and longwinded reminiscences.

 

 

SETTING

 

Troy on the night following the admittance of the Trojan Horse through the gates of the city. During the scene flames from burning buildings roar in the background and, as the Greeks sack the city, periodic shouts can be heard, as well as wailing, weeping and the occasional terrified squeals of animals.

 

 

 

 

SCENE

 

BLACK. Then gradually the flicker of flames, as from a fire in the near distance, is seen upstage. As the flames flicker, shouts and wails can be heard from offstage, faintly at first but gradually increasing in volume. These sounds of tribulation resume and subside throughout the scene.

 

LIGHT rises to reveal the gated entrance to a house upstage right. Pause. Then from this entryway, AENEAS, stripped to the waist, but with a lion skin tossed around his neck, appears, carrying his father ANCHISES on his shoulders.

 

Anchises is draped in robes and carries the holy vessels and household gods. These can be whatever you like, but there should be enough of them for it to be awkward but not impossible for Anchises to carry them all in his arms. One of them also needs to be breakable.

 

Though Anchises is old and frail, Aeneas staggers under his weight, fatigued from recent battle.

 

 

ANCHISES

I'm sorry you have to carry me. But my knees just haven't been the same since that fight with Calchas.

 

AENEAS

(Coughing from the smoke and exertion) It's all right, Father.

 

(Aeneas pauses for a moment, assessing the situation, then sets off to his right stage left. Anchises interrupts him after he’s taken only a few steps.)

 

ANCHISES

Where are you going?

 

(Aeneas stops, resigned, as though he expected this.)

 

AENEAS

To the East Gate.

 

ANCHISES

Don’t be ridiculous! We’ll be captured for sure! You need to head for the North Gate!

 

AENEAS

We’re not going to the North Gate. The Greeks have already taken the North Gate. We’d be walking right into them.

 

ANCHISES

I’m telling you, the North Gate is where we need to go! I prayed to the gods last night, and that was their answer.

 

AENEAS

And I’m telling you, I was at the North Gate last night, and I saw a dozen of our soldiers fall before the ax of Ajax! There is no way we’re getting through the North Gate! The East Gate is our only chance. Besides, I told Creusa that if we were separated, she should meet us at the East Gate.

 

ANCHISES

I can’t believe it’s come to this, that men dispute with their elders. It’s not surprising that Troy fell, with its values so corrupted already. And I, who once rode at the head of armies, am reduced to riding on my son’s back like a sack of grain.

 

AENEAS

(Aeneas is too tired to respond to the insult.) Speaking of which, Dad, I'm going to have to put you down for a moment. (He crouches down on one knee so Anchises can slip off his back.)

 

ANCHISES

No, you can't! I need to stay up here!

 

AENEAS

Why?!

 

ANCHISES

It's something your mother told me. She said it was very important that you carry me out of the city.

 

AENEAS

I think you put way too much stock in what she says.

 

ANCHISES

'Too much stock'! She's Venus, the Goddess of Love!

 

 

AENEAS

Well I don't care if she's Juno, Goddess of Domestic Terror. You need to get off me for a minute!

 

ANCHISES

(Sulkily) Fine. (He clambers off the back of Aeneas, who stands and stretches painfully.)

 

AENEAS

That's better.

 

(Attempting to ameliorate his father’s mood, Aeneas asks his opinion, knowing that he loves to offer it.)

 

AENEAS

So Dad, what do you think went wrong? (He gestures around at the burning city.)

 

ANCHISES

(Anchises warms to the topic instantly.) What went wrong? You mean besides the fact that we invited a Horseful of Greek soldiers into the gates ourselves? (Anchises minces around the stage, imitating a courtier.) ‘Oh yes, undoubtedly you'll begin pillaging our temples and raping our women and burning our homes any moment now, but wasn't it thoughtful of you to bring us this big beautiful wooden horse?’ (Suddenly Anchises spasms and grabs his knee.) Ow! My knee! (The holy vessels and household gods tumble out of his hands. Aeneas manages to catch the breakable one as Anchises drops to the stage.)

 

(Aeneas rolls his eyes as Anchises rolls around on the ground.)

 

AENEAS

I don't remember you saying that you thought bringing the Horse into the City was a bad idea.

 

ANCHISES

(Anchises sits up, apparently recovered from his injury.) No one asked me! But that's not all that went wrong. (Anchises warms to his subject like a commentator dissecting a football game.) It was a failure of leadership. Priam's a nice guy and all, but he just doesn't have the forceful personality, the manliness, of an Agamemnon or a Ulysses. Now if it had been me, I would have pressured the Lycians to open a second front right from the start, maybe attacked the Greeks from the sea.

 

(Anchises gathers the holy vessels and household gods up in front of him and arranges them into two battle lines. He continues to manipulate them during the following dialogue.)

 

ANCHISES

At the same time I'd have placed the Amazons, let's say, in the mountains, to try and draw a portion of the enemy's fighting force up there. Divide and conquer, that's the ticket!

 

(Aeneas examines Anchises battle plan. The he walks away, cracking his knuckles, and paces around a bit.)

 

AENEAS

That's an interesting theory, but I don't think you're taking into account the role that the individual warrior played in this conflict. The Greek soldiers will be written in legend. What about an Ajax or a Diomedes? What about, yes, an Agamemnon or a Ulysses—but I'm not talking about their leadership abilities now, I'm talking about their fighting abilities. What about Achilles?

 

ANCHISES

Hector could have taken Achilles.

 

(Aeneas stops in his tracks, astonished at this latest bit of nonsense. He turns back toward Anchises.)

 

AENEAS

Hector could have taken Achilles? Are you out of your mind? Achilles did take Hector, remember? And smashed him to smithereens! It was the most humiliating moment in Trojan history!

 

(Unruffled, Anchises continues to play with the gods and holy vessels.)

 

ANCHISES

As I was saying: Hector could have taken Achilles, if circumstances had been a little different on that last day. Achilles had an unfair advantage because of the way he was grieving the death of his friend Patroclus. Nobody could have taken him that day. But the next day might have been a different story.

 

(Drawn by the absurdity of this claim, Aeneas settles on the ground beside his father.)

 

AENEAS

That's a fascinating theory, Dad, very scientific. But aren't you sort of missing the point? Aren't you, as you orators like to say, committing some sort of logical fallacy? Because Hector and Achilles did fight on the day that they fought and…well…that's that. You might as well say the whole war could have been avoided if Paris had chosen among the three goddesses on a different day. Maybe on another day Juno would have looked most beautiful! I mean, who knows—maybe the next day Venus would have been on the rag!

 

ANCHISES

Shhh! For God's sake, shut your mouth!

 

AENEAS

Why should I?

 

ANCHISES

(Whispering, after looking around frantically) Your mother!

 

AENEAS

(Chuckling) You think Venus might be listening in on us?

 

ANCHISES

It's happened before!

 

AENEAS

Oh yeah? Well if she's hanging around and eavesdropping (He jumps to his feet, raises his voice and directs the following at the sky) why doesn't she show herself? Why doesn't she come out and give us a hand! I mean, hey! Hasn't she noticed? We're losing a war here! And my wife and son are God knows where!

 

ANCHISES

Take it easy! I'm sure we'll find them at the East Gate, just like you said. And try not to insult your mother. That stuff makes her crazy.

 

AENEAS

I don’t care what makes her crazy! We could use a little help here! What good does it do to be related to the gods if they don’t help you when you need them! I mean, if this is what happens to people who have a god on their side, then there might as well not be any gods!

 

(Aeneas paces around with increasing speed, following this train of thought to its conclusion for the first time in his life and counting out his points on his fingers.)

 

AENEAS

(Continuing) And if that's the case, then Man is a free agent, roaming around the universe without a contract, at will to do whatever he pleases! Anything goes! No more giving away the best meat as a sacrifice!

 

(Aeneas looks at the household god in his hand for a moment, then smashes it to the floor, where it shatters. Pause while Anchises and Aeneas stare down at the shards.)

 

ANCHISES

You broke the household god!

 

AENEAS

Yeah. In retrospect I’m thinking that wasn’t such a good idea. Which one was that?

 

ANCHISES

That was Doctorius, the one in charge of good health.

 

AENEAS

Huh. (He looks around, as though remembering for the first time that they are essentially on a battlefield.) I’m thinking maybe we shouldn’t stick around here much longer, unless we want the Greeks to seriously endanger our health.

 

ANCHISES

Yeah, they could really mess with our immune systems!

 

(Aeneas and Anchises both chuckle nervously.)

 

ANCHISES

We’d better get a move on. But listen, Son, I know you’re exhausted. I can walk.

 

AENEAS

Don’t be silly, Dad. Of course you can’t walk. (Aeneas realizes that this is tactless.) I mean, I know

you can walk, but you shouldn’t. You’re old and venerable, and I’m going to carry you.

 

ANCHISES

Absolutely not. (He rises painfully to his feet, and begins awkwardly gathering the remaining household gods and holy vessels.)

 

AENEAS

If Mom, said I should carry you, then I’m going to carry you!

 

(Aeneas bends down on one knee, and looks intently at Anchises.

After a moment, Anchises walks over and climbs aboard. Aeneas rises slowly to both feet.)

 

ANCHISES

To the East Gate then?

 

AENEAS

The East Gate it is.

 

(Aeneas continues making his way slowly across the stage in the direction he started at the opening of the scene.)

 

ANCHISES

(Confidingly) You know, your mom says you’re going to sail to Africa and found an empire!

 

AENEAS

Really?

 

ANCHISES

I swear on the household gods!

 

(Aeneas considers this for a moment.)

 

AENEAS

Where’s Africa?

 

BLACK.

 

 

END.