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Leslie Wilson
LUST AND TEQUILA
A Short Screenplay



               FADE IN:



               EXT. SAN DIEGO - CONSTRUCTION SITE - DAY

               A dozen CONSTRUCTION WORKERS strike on a skeletal high rise.
               An agitated UNION BOSS paces back and forth on a second story
               steel beam. He shouts down to the site FOREMAN and the OWNER
               of the construction company who stand on the ground.

                                   UNION BOSS
                         We're not coming down until you fix
                         it.

                                   FOREMAN
                         I can't keep shouting. Just come on
                         down and let me talk to you.

                                   UNION BOSS
                         Ain't nothing to talk about. Do it.

               The foreman turns to the owner --

                                   FOREMAN
                         What do you wanna do?

                                   OWNER
                         Fire their asses. I can get
                         Mexicans for cheaper anyway.

                                   FOREMAN
                         You know union won't --

               An old convertible pulls up, top down. SUSANNAH CLIFFORD (35)
               drives. She's neat, clean, proper, like a starched white
               napkin at a Bel Air Country Club wedding.

               ROBBY TURNER (25) rides beside her. He, on the other hand,
               looks like he leads a life as messy as Mick Jagger's. His
               long hair as disobedient as his baggy clothes.

                                   FOREMAN
                         Oh no --

                                   OWNER
                         What now?

                                   FOREMAN
                         The press.

               The owner turns around just in time to see Susannah and Robby
               step out of the car. Both hold high end digital Nikons.

                                   FOREMAN
                         Newspaper don't usually beat TV.
                         Must be ambitious.

               The owner strides toward them.

                                   OWNER
                         Out of here. This is a private
                         site.

               Robby skirts around him, snaps photos of the protesters.

                                   SUSANNAH
                         Sorry boss. First amendment and all
                         that.

               She snaps photos over his shoulder as he crowds her back
               toward her car, his arms outstretched.

                                   UNION BOSS
                         What are you afraid of? Let 'em
                         snap away you so innocent.

               The owner is distracted. Susannah slips under his arm, snaps
               photos. He's had it and turns on the union leader.

                                   OWNER
                         Damm it, you won't screw this up
                         for me --

               Leaning forward, shaking his angry finger at the owner --

                                   UNION BOSS
                         These are unsafe working
                         conditions. They're shavings --

               He loses his balance and falls.

               Robby begins to set his camera down, already moving to help
               the injured man. Susannah stops him.

                                   SUSANNAH
                         Let the others do that.
                         Journalistic integrity.
                         Objectivity. You can help them more
                         by documenting this.

               Robby nods, readies his camera to take more shots.

               The other workers rush down to help the victim. The foreman
               gets on his cell phone. The owner backs away as Susannah and
               Robby snap photos.



               EXT. SOUTHERN CALIFORNIA DESERT - HIGHWAY 

               Susannah drives Robby in the convertible.

                                   ROBBY
                         So those were pretty good, right?

                                   SUSANNAH
                         You've got a mighty lot to learn.

                                   ROBBY
                         Little guy takes on millionaire
                         asshole. That always gets the front
                         page, right?

                                   SUSANNAH
                         Oh we'll get the front page, but it
                         won't get me the Pulitzer. God, I
                         can't believe Heather Nightly beat
                         me to it. 

                                   ROBBY
                         You were a finalist.

                                   SUSANNAH
                         I'm still working for the San Diego
                         Shit Kicker. The only way I'm
                         getting to Los Angeles is the
                         Pulitzer. Why won't they send me to
                         Iraq? 

               Changing the subject --

                                   ROBBY
                         So what's the plan?

                                   SUSANNAH
                         I'm gonna stop by the sheriff's.
                         See if he'll escort us.

                                   ROBBY
                         Cool. What did you tell Eric?

                                   SUSANNAH
                         He thinks we're covering the
                         Lobster Fest in San Pedro. You
                         didn't tell anyone?

                                   ROBBY
                         Lips fused.

                                   SUSANNAH
                         Good. I don't want anyone beating
                         me to this. This could be it for
                         me. Good. Good. Mighty good.



               EXT. OUTSKIRTS OF YUMA - WAREHOUSE 

               In the middle of nowhere, a corrugated tin building rusts
               patiently. A black jeep parked out front.

               Mesas and enormous boulders, like the Jumbo Rocks of Joshua
               Tree, surround the area.



               INT. WAREHOUSE - SEWING ROOM

               ROSA (65) walks through rows of MEXICAN TEENAGE GIRLS sewing
               on machines. 

               The old Mexican woman looks like a dragon, breathing fire and
               intolerance. She wears a gold crucifix on a chain around her
               neck and carries a cane, which she uses to strike any girl
               who isn't working quickly enough. Now we regard her as a sort
               of madam, but we'll soon learn she's quite a complicated
               creature.

                                   ROSA
                         Marquez. Now there's a writer. If
                         he could describe this warehouse --

               She pauses, makes a grand sweep with her cane indicating the
               building.

                                   ROSA
                         -- almacŽn, he might use words 
                         like --

               One girl stands out: CARMENCITA (18). She is defiant,
               rebellious, as vibrant as the color red.

               Close on a second girl: long-haired PALOMA (16). Soft and
               quiet. Like a dove. She watches Rosa. Listening carefully.

                                   ROSA
                         -- infernal. How would he work the
                         red ants in here? Probably have
                         them eat you. Ha-ha. I'd sure like
                         to see that. Right on the border.
                         La frontera. Seamstress sandwiches.

               The garment Carmencita is working on slips and falls to the
               ground. Rosa rushes to her and raises her cane. Carmencita
               stands and grabs the cane as Rosa strikes.

               Enter EMILIO (40). Dark and diabolic. Like he has scorpion
               blood in his veins. Shouting --

                                   EMILIO
                         Parada. SiŽntese. Si usted valora
                         su vida. 

               Carmencita narrows her eyes at Emilio, releases the cane, and
               sits down.

               He crosses to Rosa, slaps her face.

                                   EMILIO
                         I told you not to speak English to
                         these girls. Education will ruin
                         them. Silencio. No m‡s cuentos.

               His partner SAMMY (40) walks in. Blonde, pale, thin, strung
               out.

                                   SAMMY
                         What's going on?

                                   EMILIO
                         Nothing. I got it.

               Emilio notices Paloma, crosses to her, fingers a lock of her
               hair.

                                   EMILIO
                         We may have another one soon.

               Sammy joins him.

                                   SAMMY
                         Pretty hair. She said she wanted
                         one with pretty hair.

                                   EMILIO
                             (to Paloma)
                         You ready to move to the other
                         house? Huh?

               Paloma looks up at them. Distrust in her eyes.

               Emilio drops her hair. He and Sammy exit.

               She pulls her hair back into a pony tail.



               EXT. YUMA - SHERIFF STATION

               Small town on the California-Mexico border. A few businesses
               crumbling here and there. Some scattered houses in the
               distance. The whole place is tired, desperate. Like an
               alcoholic after a two day binge.

               Susannah parks in front of a dusty, wooden building, more
               worn out than her oldest shoe. She and Robby get out of the
               car.



               INT. SHERIFF STATION

               Susannah and Robby walk in to find Sheriff ELTON JEFFERS (50)
               behind the desk doing paperwork. He looks corrupt, corroded,
               like the pipes in the old bungalows on the Hollywood Hills.

               Sheriff Jeffers looks up, leans back in the chair.

                                   ELTON
                         You must be the busy body.

                                   SUSANNAH
                         I beg --

                                   ELTON
                         Got busy body written all over you.

                                   SUSANNAH
                         Are you gonna help me or not?

                                   ELTON
                         Like I told you. There ain't
                         nothing like that going on here.
                         You got a psychedelic imagination.
                         Must be all that fancy bottled
                         water you drink over there in the
                         city. Kinda messes with your mind.

                                   SUSANNAH
                         Fine. We'll find it ourselves.

                                   ELTON
                         The hell you will. I won't have you
                         disturbing our local industry. Now
                         you get that fine ass set back down
                         in your car and go back to where
                         you came from or I'll drag you back
                         and plop you down in my cooling off
                         box.

               Robby reaches for her elbow.

                                   ROBBY
                             (to Susannah)
                         Come on.

               She resists. Then follows him to the door.

                                   SUSANNAH
                             (to Elton)
                         Thanks. You're ever so helpful.
                         They must have paid you off mighty.

               Susannah and Robby exit. 

               Sheriff Jeffers reaches for the phone.



               EXT. UNPAVED DESERT ROAD

               Susannah and Robby in the convertible. Robby shuffles through
               papers.

                                   SUSANNAH
                         What do her notes say?

               He examines the papers.

                                   ROBBY
                         It should be up here on the south
                         side.

               Susannah spots the warehouse we had seen before. She veers
               toward it.

                                   SUSANNAH
                         How the mighty will fall.



               EXT. BEHIND BOULDERS NEAR WAREHOUSE

               Susannah and Robby pull up.



               INT. WAREHOUSE - OFFICE

               Sparse. Bare, corrugated tin walls. Pornography and tequila
               bottles litter the desk. 

               There's a front door and a small one which leads to the back
               sewing room.

               Emilio hangs up the phone as he and Sammy hear TIRES ON
               GRAVEL. 

               Emilio crosses to a small peephole, looks out. He turns to
               Sammy --

                                   EMILIO
                         Hurry.

               Sammy rushes to the small, back door.



               EXT. BEHIND BOULDERS NEAR WAREHOUSE

               Susannah and Robby prepare their cameras.



               INT. WAREHOUSE - SEWING ROOM

               Sammy waves a gun and hushes the girls. 

                                   SAMMY
                         Underground. Now.

               He and Rosa herd the girls to a small door in the ground at
               the back of the room.



               INT. WAREHOUSE - OFFICE

               Emilio looks through the peephole.



               EXT. WAREHOUSE

               Nothing. Just boulders and mesas.



               EXT. BEHIND BOULDERS NEAR WAREHOUSE

               Susannah and Robby get out of the car. They creep to the
               boulders.



               INT. WAREHOUSE - SEWING ROOM

               The last girl disappears underground. Rosa closes the door,
               drags a chair on top of it, sits down. 

               Sammy stands nearby with the gun, listening.



               INT. WAREHOUSE - OFFICE

               Emilio looks through the peephole. He sees a slight movement
               around one side of a boulder.

               He crosses to his desk, gets a gun out of a drawer, and walks
               to the front door.



               EXT. WAREHOUSE

               Emilio throws the front door open, charges toward the
               boulder, and waves his gun.

                                   EMILIO
                         Get out of here. There's nothing
                         for your pictures.



               EXT. BEHIND BOULDERS NEAR WAREHOUSE

               Susannah turns to Robby.

                                   SUSANNAH
                         I knew that sheriff was on the
                         take.



               EXT. WAREHOUSE

               Emilio continues to charge the boulder.

                                   EMILIO
                         Esto es la propiedad privada. Salga
                         de aqu’.

               He brandishes the gun then SHOOTS at the boulder.



               EXT. BEHIND BOULDER NEAR WAREHOUSE

               Susannah and Robby look at each other.

                                   ROBBY
                         Holy crap.

                                   SUSANNAH
                         We need a plan B. Let's go.

               They run to the car as they hear another BULLET HIT the
               boulder.

               They both jump.

                                   ROBBY
                         You wanted a war zone.

               They get in the car.



               INT. WAREHOUSE

               Sammy looks through a slim opening between the tin panels. He
               hears a CAR START. Turning to Rosa, he says --

                                   SAMMY
                         It's okay.

               Rosa stands up. As she starts to pull the chair away, it
               flies toward her as the door is forced open by Carmencita.
               She jumps out of the hole yelling --

                                   CARMENCITA
                         Ayuda. Ayśdenos. En aqu’. 

               She runs toward the tin walls and pounds them with her fist.

                                   CARMENCITA
                         Ayuda. Ayuda.



               EXT. BEHIND BOULDER NEAR WAREHOUSE

               Susannah hears a FAINT SCREAM.

               She looks at Robby.

                                   SUSANNAH
                         Did you hear that?

                                   ROBBY
                         What?

                                   SUSANNAH
                         Someone just called for help.

               They hear more BULLETS HITTING THE BOULDER. Susannah puts the
               car in gear and drives away.



               INT. WAREHOUSE - SEWING ROOM

               Sammy rushes to Carmencita and wrestles her to the floor. He
               puts his hands around her throat, strangling her.

               She struggles, coughs, kicks, but she's no match for his
               strength. Before long, she is still, silent, dead.

               Sammy stands.

               The girls come up through the door one by one. They are
               alternately shocked, upset, crying as they see what has
               happened to their friend.

               Rosa is visibly shaken by this turn of events. She crosses to
               Carmencita and closes her eyes. Whispering -- 

                                   ROSA
                         "Because races condemned to one
                         hundred years of solitude did not
                         have a second opportunity on
                         earth."

               Rosa stands and covers any sentimentality.

                                   ROSA
                         See girls. You are nothing more
                         than slaves. Slaves. Esclavos. You
                         work hard and this won't happen to
                         you.

               Perhaps Rosa's not all bad. Is she teaching the girls key
               words in English? Sure seems like it.

               Paloma, especially, is listening.

               Then Emilio enters, gun still in hand.

                                   EMILIO
                         En espa–ol, Rosa. En espa–ol. 

               He crosses to Carmencita, kicks her.

                                   EMILIO
                         Stupid bitch.

                                   SAMMY
                         They hear anything?

                                   EMILIO
                         I don't think so. I don't think so.



               EXT. DESERT HIGHWAY

               Susannah and Robby driving.

                                   SUSANNAH
                         I know I heard something. I know
                         it. Mind spending the night?

                                   ROBBY
                         Anything for a Pulitzer. Isn't that
                         what you always say?

                                   SUSANNAH
                         Damn straight. Mighty good,
                         wouldn't it be?



               INT. WAREHOUSE - NIGHT

               The girls sit at their machines sewing.

               Rosa paces the aisles. If a girl's head drops from fatigue,
               Rosa strikes her with the cane.

                                   ROSA
                         And what do you think Ursula did?
                         She built a palace for Rebeca and
                         Amaranta. She wanted them to have a
                         chance at the prince. Yes? And what
                         would you do if you were tied to a
                         chestnut tree? Escape? Esc‡pese?

               Paloma rests her head on the sewing table. Rosa pokes her
               with her cane.

                                   ROSA
                         Atienda, Paloma. ŔMe escucha usted?

               Paloma sits up and begins to sew again. We can see the girls
               are exhausted. 

               Enter Emilio. Swigging tequila.

                                   EMILIO
                         Just what I like to see. A happy
                         family, working together.

               He crosses to Paloma and fingers her hair, still in a pony
               tail.

                                   EMILIO
                         Magn’fico.

               Sammy leans in the doorway.

                                   SAMMY
                         Ready?

                                   EMILIO
                         Coming.

               He drops Paloma's hair.

                                   EMILIO
                             (to Rosa)
                         Get her ready for the other house.

               Rosa nods.

               Emilio and Sammy exit.

               Rosa continues her pacing up and down the aisles.

                                   ROSA
                         I forgot to tell you about the wars
                         the Colonel lost. Thirty-two.
                         Treinta dos.

               Paloma lays her head down again. Rosa picks up shears and
               walks up behind her. Very quietly.

                                   ROSA
                         The army machine-gunned three
                         thousand workers. How'd you like
                         that? Machine-gunned.

               As she says these last two words, she picks up Paloma's pony
               tail and cuts it off at the nape of her neck.

               Paloma gasps. The other girls are horrified. Then Paloma
               starts to cry. 

               Did Rosa cut off Paloma's hair to protect her? 

               Rosa walks to a garbage can and throws it away.



               EXT. STARDUST MOTEL

               Just off highway. Looks old and cheap. Like a cracked vinyl
               handbag in a thrift shop.

               Susannah and Robby pull up.



               INT. STARDUST MOTEL - FRONT DESK

               Susannah and Robby check in.



               INT. STARDUST MOTEL - ROOM

               Robby lies on the bed beside both cameras as Susannah paces.

                                   SUSANNAH
                         I'm sure of it. Positive.

                                   ROBBY
                         Wish I could help you.

                                   SUSANNAH
                         Why can't men ever hear anything?

                                   ROBBY
                         We're too busy thinking about sex.

                                   SUSANNAH
                         I'm calling the INS.



               INT. WAREHOUSE - SEWING ROOM

               Dark.

               Rosa sits at a chair beside a small table with a reading
               lamp, a dim circle of light. She reads Gabriel Garc’a
               M‡rquez's One Hundred Years of Solitude.

               All the girls are asleep on pallets beside their sewing
               tables, all of the girls except Paloma. 

               Through the legs of chairs and sewing tables, she watches
               Rosa who turns a page, reads some more, then sets the book,
               open page down, on the table. She stands and walks out the
               door.

               Paloma stands and moves to the slit between tin panels Sammy
               had looked through before. She pries them apart and slips
               out.



               EXT. WAREHOUSE

               Moonlight reflects off tin.

               Paloma slides along the edge of the building. She turns the
               corner and bumps into a figure. It's Rosa.

               Paloma gasps. Rosa clasps her hands.

                                   ROSA
                         Carmencita I would have thought.
                         But never you. The sweet one. The
                         dove. Pueda a Dios est‡ con usted. 

               She pushes Paloma away and disappears around the corner. 

               Paloma looks down into her hand. Rosa has given her the gold
               crucifix.

               Paloma turns and runs into the darkness.



               INT. STARDUST MOTEL - ROOM

               Robby in bed. Susannah still pacing and talking on her cell
               phone.

                                   SUSANNAH
                             (into phone)
                         I heard a girl....yes, I'm
                         positive...I have the reporter's
                         notes. No...don't transfer me to
                         ICE...



               INT. WAREHOUSE - SEWING ROOM

               Emilio stands above Paloma's empty pallet. 

               Rosa enters. 

               He looks up at her. He is holding Paloma's pony tail in his
               hand.



               EXT. DESERT

               Paloma runs through the darkness. 

               She trips and falls into a cactus. The spines cut her. She's
               bleeding, but she pulls herself together, sees lights in the
               distance, runs toward them.



               EXT. WAREHOUSE

               Emilio and Sammy run out the front door toward the jeep.



               INT. STARDUST MOTEL - ROOM

               Susannah yells into her cell phone.

                                   SUSANNAH
                         He won't help us...on the take I'm
                         sure...Jacumbo...yeah, on the
                         border.



               EXT. DESERT - WITH PALOMA

               She runs across the desert, hears a car, looks behind her,
               sees lights moving toward her.



               EXT. DESERT - WITH JEEP

               Emilio and Sammy bounce through the desert. They too head
               toward the lights.



               INT. STARDUST MOTEL - ROOM 

               Susannah puts her cell phone on the bedside table, on the far
               side of the bed away from the door.

                                   SUSANNAH
                         They're sending the troops.

                                   ROBBY
                         What do we do?

                                   SUSANNAH
                         Wait.



               EXT. DESERT - WITH PALOMA

               She runs up to the Stardust Motel.

                                   PALOMA
                         Ayuda. Ayuda.

               We see the car lights in the distance, coming closer.



               INT. STARDUST MOTEL - ROOM

               Susannah hears a sound, runs to the window, looks out.

               She sees a bleeding and disheveled Mexican girl running
               across the parking lot. Susannah rushes to the door.

               Robby gets up and follows her.



               EXT. STARDUST HOTEL - PARKING LOT

               Paloma rushes up to Susannah. Robby is behind them.

                                   PALOMA
                         Ayśdeme. Soy tenido contra mi hace. 

                                   SUSANNAH
                         I bet it's the girl who called for
                         help. I knew I heard somebody.
                         Mighty. God almighty. Do you speak
                         Spanish?

                                   ROBBY
                         Four years of Latin.

                                   SUSANNAH
                         Shit.

                                   PALOMA
                         Ayśdeme. Ayśdeme.

                                   SUSANNAH
                         Okay. Slow down. What?

               Paloma pants, tries to calm down, thinks --

                                   PALOMA
                         Esclavos. Slaves.

                                   SUSANNAH
                         I knew it.

                                   PALOMA
                         AlmacŽn.

               Paloma pants, catches her breath, looks up at Susannah. A
               flash through her eyes: a new understanding for what Rosa had
               done for her. Paloma looks down at the crucifix still
               clutched in her hand. Then she looks up at Susannah.

                                   PALOMA
                         Warehouse. La Frontera. The border.

               The jeep is closing in now. Robby notices the lights
               approaching.

                                   ROBBY
                         Susannah.

                                   SUSANNAH
                         We've gotta get out of here.

               Robby grabs Paloma's hand and drags her to the convertible.

               Susannah runs into the motel room. 



               INT. STARDUST MOTEL - ROOM

               Susannah rushes in. She may be heading toward a cell phone,
               but she stops at the bed and grabs her camera instead. Then
               she rushes out.



               EXT. STARDUST MOTEL - PARKING LOT

               The jeep approaches.

               Susannah jumps in the driver seat of the convertible. Robby
               and Paloma are in the back. 

               Susannah starts the car and pulls out of the parking lot. 

               Emilio and Sammy see Paloma and follow the car out of the
               lot.



               EXT. DESERT HIGHWAY

               Susannah speeds down the highway. Emilio and Sammy are on
               their tail. Gun in hand, Sammy leans out and SHOOTS.

               Susannah, Paloma, and Robby duck. Susannah swerves. The
               jeep's right on them now.

               Sammy leans out, SHOOTS again, hits a tire.

               Susannah swerves off the road. In her headlights, a cliff
               rises, massive boulders all around. She heads toward the
               formations.

               The jeep is always right with them.



               EXT. DESERT CLIFFS

               Susannah slams on breaks at the foot of the rise. She,
               Paloma, and Robby leap from the car. Susannah forgets the
               camera, reaches back in for it, slings it around her head and
               across her shoulder.

               Emilio and Sammy stop behind them. Both get out, guns
               BLASTING. 

               Robby is hit in the back of the head, falls forward.

               Paloma stops, looks back at him. Susannah grabs her, pulls
               her behind a boulder.

               They look out. Clearly, Robby is dead.

                                   EMILIO
                         We've got you. Come on. We won't
                         hurt you.

               Susannah looks around. She sees a pathway in amongst the
               rocks and cliffs. She grabs Paloma and pushes her up it.

               Paloma creeps along the path, Susannah following. Stone walls
               rise on either side.

               They hear FOOTSTEPS behind them. They hurry.

               The path opens to a sheer cliff wall, a hundred feet down.

               Susannah begins to move left across a ledge. She beckons
               Paloma to follow. She does. The ledge is very weak, giving
               beneath them as they go.

               Still, they hear FEET ON GRAVEL.

               Susannah find a narrow crevice, about ten inches wide. She
               slips in and pulls Paloma behind her, but Paloma won't fit.
               Susannah pulls, but the pass is too narrow.

                                   EMILIO
                         Here she is.

                                   SAMMY
                         Right behind you.

               Susannah hears SHOTS. Suddenly Paloma goes limp. She's been
               shot and slumps on the ledge. Susannah still has her arm and
               holds on tight.

               Then Susannah hears it. A LANDSLIDE. 

                                   EMILIO
                         Oh God.

                                   SAMMY
                         Jesus Christ.

               Emilio and Sammy fall to their death as the ledge gives way.

               Susannah holds on to Paloma who is failing fast although the
               ledge holds beneath her.

               Susannah tries to squeeze back out through the crack to help
               Paloma, but her camera catches, wedged between her body and
               the rocks. She hesitates, then pushes forward, destroying the
               camera in the process.

               Paloma's really struggling now. Susannah administers CPR, but
               it's no use. Paloma looks up at Susannah and holds up the
               gold crucifix.

                                   PALOMA
                         Rosa. Rosa.

               Susannah has tears in her eyes. She nods and takes the cross
               just as Paloma dies. 

               A moth, or perhaps a yellow butterfly, flutters by.
               
               EXT. WAREHOUSE

               Susannah drives up. INS cars, officers, and the girls all mingle.

               Susannah gets out and walks through the confusion.

                                  SUSANNAH
                         Rosa? Rosa?

               Susannah finds herself face to face with the old woman.

                                  SUSANNAH
                         Rosa?

               Rosa nods.

               Susannah takes her hand and lays the gold crucifix in it.

               Rosa looks down at the crucifix then up at Susannah's face, bloody, sweaty, dirty, tired.

               Tears spring into Rosa's eyes as she nods, understanding.

               EXT. DESERT HIGHWAY

               Dark. No street lights.

               Susannah drives in her convertible, top still down. No longer neat, clean, proper. No longer like a starched white napkin at a Bel Air Country Club wedding.
               Passing headlights reveal tears standing in her eyes.

						               
               FADE OUT